Kaknifu's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[What a lovely day]

Beginning piano could of used some complexity (maybe some velocity variation as well), and I find most of the sound leans to the left ear too much, making it unbalanced. The flute sounds that come in is quite good. Overall, you did fit the bill of the them you were given, so good job.

GreyHooves responds:

Thanks for the critique! I admit that I do generally lean towards simplicity the happier a piece sounds for whatever reason :P
But I definitely do hear what you're saying about the panning. When you work on something for so long it makes it hard to mix appropriately. Wish I had someone to mix and master my music for me :P

[Death In Hope]

Song had potential, but consider removing/lessening some of the delay/reverb effects as it drowns most of the song out and makes it hard to listen to. Around 2:23 I started noticing where you loops start and end, as there is a brief pause before it starts again, consider trying making more of an effort to make the loop seamless. The song could benefit from having a bass added. Anywho goodluck to your next song endeavors, cheers.